The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/11
Fantastic, well done. Yes we need the Father's love.
08/13/11
Just beautiful, and so very true. I like the way you wrote this, it's easy to read and flows so nicely. I'll probably print this out and put it on my fridge! Well done.
08/14/11
Well written with a great message! I especially liked:
"But in all of my selfish moments I come to the realization, that in
my life I need you more than you need me."

Good job! -God Bless you~
This is beautiful. I'm not sure if changing from a small i to a capital I was to show the MC gaining confidence. I often don't get the subtle nuances in poems. Nice job.