The Official Writing Challenge
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I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I had to chuckle at what the little girl said about the neighbor. I disease. Bless you for such an inspiring story.
A fun glimpse into a mother's kitchen...nice job.
A great "catchy" title and a story that did not disappoint. Well done.
I like this. All of the characters were great.

Try to challenge yourself more by writing about the topic without using the name of the topic in you story. Your story line is strong and fit the topic, but I seldom hear anyone say "much ado about nothing" these days. Using a more modern phrase would make the dialog more believable.

Having said that, it really was an enjoyable read with a great message and a nice bit of humor too.
"Food, snacks and belly rubs." That keeps my two little dogs happy ---and they tolerate the scarves around their necks. Your story flows very well and has warm fuzzies throughout. Nice job.