The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/11
A painful but creative approach to the challenge topic. I also thought your charecters were well written for such a short format.
Wow! What a story! You had me spell-bound wondering where this was going. Great job!
Wow what a message. Other than show vs. tell(ex.this line paints a picture: I have no advice for this heart-wrenching tale. But then you tell us what she said, Put it in quotes instead ,it'll make the reader feel like the reader is hearing it.)

Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two.