The Official Writing Challenge
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We need more police officers like this one. Great story. I find it interesting that it is the simple answers and discernment of a sick little boy that finally reach the MC's heart. Good writing!
07/28/11
Practical story, beautiful truth. Well done.
08/04/11
awww lovely :-) you got the teenage persona down to a tee :-) and such an original twist in the tale... clever :-) and endearing.