The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/11
I love a story that shares scripture while preserving morality. It held a good message and was on target with the theme. Good easy read without all the "tiring metaphors and fancy words" some authors use which can over power the message they seek to create. Nice style of writing...Keep up the good work, and God Bless you~
A well told story from beginning to end. In the sentence "...fiddling with her matted hair bread," I think you meant "braid." Well done.