The Official Writing Challenge
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This is gut-wrenching. Very well written. Great, great job. There are many children who currently suffer more than I can imagine and are so, so brave. I'm glad you shared with us that she knew God. The ending was so sad, but we had the hope that she went to Heaven where she truly will be "forever a princess."
07/29/11
Wow - that was intense and riveting. Although the ending was sad; I rejoiced knowing that her dreams of "serving the King in the fields freely" were now in fact a reality for her. She escaped "prison" and was now "eternally free." GOOD JOB...God Bless you~