The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the idea that two worlds unite when we truly come into the presence of God, and that we then know something of Paradise.
Your descriptive terms are lofty, beautiful and alluring, like a foretaste of the Paradise to come.
07/25/11
You have a great sense and expression of imagery - and anticipation. Well done.
07/26/11
this is a very rich picture and every word rolls around on the tongue to taste and see. almost poetic in its telling and reminds me of my very favorite poet Gerald Manley- Hopkins.
A new title other than the original theme would perfect this almost perfect piece....will it be a winner... well it is one i am going to return to as it is pure gold and rubies.
07/27/11
Outstanding word artistry than makes you want to linger in the wonder of each scene! Beautifully done! Enjoyed!