The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/11
Wow! I love your writing style. The subject matter is sad, but I was there every step. I'm glad he found peace.

I would like to hear more of the way you portray suspense. It kept me glued to the story and was not confusing.
07/15/11
This is truly gripping reality. I love that the soldier knew the source of his strength, then the ultimate peace. Incredible writing.
07/16/11
Suspenseful! A true attention grabber. Loved your descriptive details. You definitely put the reader at each scene. Nice piece!
07/21/11
good story :-) well described an d masterfully told
07/25/11
A very descriptive piece. Good writing with dramatic content on the heart wrenching topic of war. "Those who call on the name of the Lord, shall be saved."