The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/11
Thank you for the personalized definition of peace. Peace is a person -- Jesus. I liked the observation of the birds. Even they know.
07/15/11
Wonderful "bird's eye view."
Thanks for sharing this one.
07/21/11
wonderful story fable or tale. I love the beginings with the river and then the focus on the birds... got a taste of the jungle book here and i could picture the scene... got to be a winner?