The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/11
Very well written. You had my adrenelin pumping too, but puleeze -- give some paragraphs to my eyes. It makes it so much easier to read and so much more enjoyable. I love peace, don't you?
07/15/11
The school system is a war zone. Oh, that each child could be blessed with a mentor like this. Love this story.
07/15/11
Very realistic. On topic, well written, good word choices and nice pace. Paragraphs will make it easier to read, but this is well done.