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07/15/11
This was a great story. I liked the majority dialogue on the part of Mom. Her explanation of Jesus' gift of salvation was very comforting. Good job.
07/15/11
A close friend recently asked almost the same question as the son in your story. Wish I had read this before I attempted an answer. You address it so well! Great writing.
07/15/11
I had this conversation with a "Brad" in my life recently.
The war of the mind is fought daily in most of us, and too often we lose. Thanks for a gentle reminder to opt for peace. Great story, right on topic and nicely written.
07/15/11
Thanking God in advance shows our faith and trust in His answer. Good story and good writing.
07/18/11
thank you I like the immediacy and simplicity of this writing. It is a good way to explore the subject of war and peace through a dialogue between mother and son. no doubt this is a conversation that is oft repeated in many homes but the touches of detail make it original.