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06/17/11
Very interesting read; I really enjoyed it.

The one thing that confused me was why the doctor, if he was a believing Christian, would submit his patient to hypnosis. Or did something happen to them all along the way?

Nice message at the end. I love the way you talked about all the pieces of armor a believer needs to put on.

06/18/11
Very creative idea! I felt it needed more conflict, but it was a good concept.
This is a powerful piece. You did an outstanding job showing me what was going on.

My minister did his Thesis for his doctorate in dreams. I believe this could be quite close to different types of dreams he studied.

I know the Bible passage is too long to quote, butI wish you'd been able to quote one or two pertinent verses as most probably won't took it up. But this is a great, vivid story that I really enjoyed.