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06/17/11
This reminds me of a Christmas sermon given years ago about the gift of salvation that is free for the taking. Enjoyed the scripture references and the happy ending. Good job.
06/22/11
clever and well told :-) you wove the checkout idea in cleverly
This is a lovely dream that will come true for all who ask Jesus into their hearts. Nicely done.