The Official Writing Challenge
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When they checked out they made me nervous. I thought the arrestee might try to get away or cause more of an uproar in the precint. Very clearly written encounter...seems as if this was just a taste of the story. I enjoyed it.
I thought it was very realistic. You didn't get caught up in explaining things, but kept the exchanges moving along. It does make me want to read more and see what happens next between Monica and Officer Dillon. Nice story. Good pace.
Very interesting take on topic. I love how you worked it all in. That line of work must take patience.
This was a fun read and took me in a direction I didn't expect to go. It bothers me that he seemed to enjoy tightening the cuffs but I'm sure that is probably part of the job. Then when I read the line " or so the arrestee thought" and I wondered if he just pretended to lighten them. Nice job with a fresh take on the topic.