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I wonder how many will have that opportunity to truly look through their eyes at their lives today. A very inspiring story and one written from the heart.
Wow, this is such a treasure, just as the scrapbooks of precious memories are. I love the way you created such a beautiful story,from infancy to maturity, told by a pair of eyes. I loved your ending and message. This inspires me to make sure that the Lord is seen in my eyes, His joy, love and beauty. Awesome-a winner in my book.WELL DONE!!
06/15/11
great story, great topic and really clever 'look' at the theme.You are a talented person and it shines through this story.
Wow I loved the depth of this piece I could picture each and every set of eyes. What you say is so true as a mother I can look into my child's eyes and know they are ill or that something is bothering them. I liked how you stuck to the topic but added a twist with the play on words of out look. Nicely done.

Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!