The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/05
Hi, OHHHHHHH WOWWWWW!!!
This is so great! I loved reading your poem all the way through. I was glad I was the first to reply--and seen that the fruit didn't die--thanks to the fruity flavorful charactors in your story. I really could add alot more--but I hear the voice of reason. To me this is a winner. God bless ya, littlelight
10/22/05
WOW this is great and as wonderful and satisfying as sweet piece of fruit. Really clever and as real as the God who inspired it. Thanks for sharing your beautiful insight into life.
10/22/05
Very well done. What a wonderful lesson we learn here about perseverance and love and faith, all working together.