The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your title and the story was very well written. Only a few it seems put on God Glasses in this crazy old world. Keep wearing God Glasses and He will lead you forever.
What a lesson creatively and sincerely written. I really like this piece! Well done! Great devotional message here-this needs to be used in Sunday sermons seriously! Lord, help us to to quit looking through our scratched, smudged and self produced versions of your All seeing glasses. We may think we have 20/20 and maybe we do physically- but all of us have a carnal stigmatism and we need God's spirit to reveal to our spirit how He truly sees things.Again, I really was moved by this.
06/11/11
great story i was waiting for you to say that you had all hiked up BUT could not get back down again! as it is sometimes harder to climb DOWN without the ropes and gear :-) but no it took a different direction.you certainly soared out from the rock to a different perspective good one
This is a hood story with many messages. I think you might have been able to start right off with your friend's stories. By using dialog and descriptions you could have expanded on what I was yearning to hear more of the details and changes in your friend. I really liked the phrase God glasses and that is a great message. I also liked how you introduced the conflict in your friend's story and how she went about resolving it. Nice job
06/16/11
well done on that second place...some great stories in level two this week so warmest congrats