The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story--superb plot--and the ending blew me away!
06/03/11
Well done monologue. I could feel the narrator's pride and anger. Nice twist at the end.
06/08/11
You wrote this in a unique way and I think you did a good job. Great story-telling. Love the ending! Nice.
06/09/11
i managed to miss commenting on this before..in fact i think i must have commented and forgot to press the send button. Great story very funny and gripping and entertaining twists and turns :-)
This is a great story and the ending surprised me. Nice job.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!