The Official Writing Challenge
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I don't normally enjoy rhyming poetry, but this one worked. I loved the theme and simplistic message that ran through. It's thought provoking enough so that it made me sit afterward for a moment thinking of all the times Satan has offered me a "gift" to sellout, without it feeling preachy. Well written!
06/04/11
Powerful reminder of the choice we have. Nicely done!
06/05/11
well done short but packed with meaning....some great writing in this level this week. going to be a close call i reckon .
This A powerful poem you did A great job with it.