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This is very emotive. It would be horrible to be placed in such a position, but what a sensible decision he made in the end. The love and commitment of/to family is worth all the name calling in the world! Well done.
Wow, you captured the atmosphere, the emotions and the struggle of the Michael and Mance. Well written. Right on topic, very touching. You may do well with one.
this is great. I agree that it should do well. chose what is worth fighting for... very hard I know little about the history of America and particular he civil war but you have brought it to life.
An excellent story, very well written. War forces choices on so many. I am so glad we no longer send young boys to war, although 18 is still a boy to me. Michael and Mance came alive through your story. Good job! God bless!
Oh what a wonderful way to represent sellout, plus an interesting history lesson to boot. I never thought what it would have been like for the South after the war was over Thanks for the great story.
congr5atulations on the first place a well deserving win