The Official Writing Challenge
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Brilliant writing and concept. I loved the dialogue between Satan and his demons--your words especially struck me when he talked of Jesus' death. Very cleverly written and as entertaining as the conversation was, it still was unsettling enough not to glorify Hell and its dark angels. Great work!
06/03/11
Very interesting perspective. Good dialogue, descriptive, great meassage and on topic. Very good writing.
06/05/11
creepy and atmospheric well done
06/06/11
Great message and well written. Excellent take on this week's topic. Well done! God bless!
This is A great story. It gave me Goosebumps. I was thinking of a similar idea but didn't get it written and I'm glad because you did a wonderful job with it.

I think it would have had an even greater punch if you had left off the last paragraph. Your story was so strong and powerful it stands nicely on its own merit, the reader definitely gets the message.

You did a great job with this dark but real topic! And the characters and setting was vividly painted in my mind.
06/09/11
congrats on the HC :-)