The Official Writing Challenge
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wow you managed to fit SO much into the word count, a whole story in 3 short episodes. This was really engaging and i loved the way you started and finished with those creepy black figures. Good story and good title.
Ohh, I really like this! I like the title, I love the intro, and I love the progression of Hope through her teenage years. A truly great story. Well done!
Great opening line. I liked the tone and flow of the piece. It carries an important message. Good job.
Incredible!! Loved how you strung 10-15 years in three narratives. Great piece. Great message
Good message. Captivating tale that holds the readers interest. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
I am glad Hope is willing to stand alone. It is difficult to do so against so much peer pressure.

Well written story.
This is outstanding. Peer pressure is so hard to resist. I loved how you subtle inserted the dark figures. Excellent message in so many ways. I also enjoyed the fresh take on the topic.
well done on 3rd place :-)