The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/11
This is cute! I like it.

There are a few minor grammatical errors, but nothing that detracted from the piece as a whole.

Great job with this one. I loved the line about how she was just upset that she didn't think of the idea.
05/28/11
great story :-) the title tells you what to expect personally i would have shortened it though to just the first 5 words :-) loved the contents you ave a way with words and your writing is full of warmth and humour and joy....
This a sweet idea and you expressed yourself well.
05/31/11
Thanks for sharing this sweet story. Keep writing!
06/02/11
well done... we can both celebrate together on our HC placings :-) onwards and upwards i will enjoy reading more of your entries. YAY!