The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever! I loved the dialogue especially because it wasn't forced, flowed nicely, and felt very realistic. Dialogue is a weaker spot for me so I deff. appreciate the strength of it in your piece. Well written :) It could even be fun translated into a script for a play!
05/27/11
A very witty and clever portrayal of how things might have gone down way back when (well, maybe not exactly, but we can always imagine it was something like this!). Have you written one like this before (similar setting?). You are extremely good at dialogue; I agree that this would be an excellent script for a church drama/skit leading into the verse you quoted at the end. Well done!
Very well done Di11. A very different take on the topic. Makes you wonder if some of the Jews back in Jesus' time did just that...searched the scriptures concerning Him.
05/31/11
Excellent writing - delightful read. Thanks for sharing.
06/01/11
A very interesting approach on the topic. Enjoyed the read.