The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a charming little tale with a moral that we all need to learn and remember as we view this world we live in!
Good lesson. :-)
Not sure what the 'no comment' at the end is about, but I enjoyed the story. A good lesson in it. Good job!
10/22/05
A "brown blob in the perfect green carpet of goat-mown grass", eh?! Well done. Just a suggestion - an empty line between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader. Good job.