The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/11
Wonderful :-) I love those retold bible stories and you have really got into the character of this one.. lovely descriptions... another winner for me!
05/27/11
This is very insightful and shows a deep revelation of God's holy word within your spirit. I had never thought of myself as 'outlandish' but you've shown that's exactly as we, as Christians, should appear to the 'world'! A really wonderful entry (my only nit-pick would be to somehow indicate the end of one section/start of the next - but this really isn't a big thing). Great job!
05/31/11
No matter how many times we hear them or how many ways they are told we never tire of the old truths of the Bible's characters. It's like watching the same movie over and over again- each time you get something different from the story. Your title is excellent and you did a great job of tying you story up in a neat bow at the end. Well done! Thanks for sharing.