The Official Writing Challenge
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wow! great righting and writing as well :-) right on the nail.... entertaining strangers unawares. some great moments like that of the drops of water smudging his notes like tears...
Beautifully written. It magnifies even the pastor's heart -- judgmental and then broken. Love (God is love) will break off those uncomely parts every time.
Wow! This one left me dumbfounded for a moments, butit showed this pastor was genuine and wanted to invite the girl he saw correctly. It took the love of Christ to help him move in that direction. Great writing!
Great message of a level ground at the foot of the cross for "whosoever will may come." Excellent description of the young girl - drew me right in to your story. Keep up the good work.
a well deserved 2nd place you are a talented writer look forward to reading more congratulations!