The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/11
wooo good one so powerful and i like the way it is told in short bursts. almost like a machine gun or staccato.
Is it a retelling of the story of the prodigal son? and in a way that mirrors so many real up to date timeless relevance.could be modern or old.... great... will it be a winner? certainly possible!
imagery, cadence and rhyme are truly remarkable -- great job!
05/21/11
I love that story! You've brought it to life in your free-verse poem. Very nice!
This is a very powerful piece. The dialog felt so real and raw. you did a nice job with a tough topic.,
That is like a lot of Christian. They must hit the bottom and the only way out is to look up. God takes nine hundred and ninety nine steps and we take one.