The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/11
that is such a clever story.. :-)
05/20/11
I enjoyed this. Your character names gave this a whole new meaning. :) Then hope shines with your ending. Nice work!
I love how you handled the word dropout. An updated version of Jesus Christ's love for man and the price he paid.
05/26/11
well done on 3rd place :-)
05/27/11
This modern day telling was done with just the right amount of Biblical history for each reader to reflect on. Liked the fresh approach to this familiar story.