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05/20/11
wow! what a great story.... I don't think the MC had really dropped her faith as much as she thought. It sounds like she made some wrong choices but was still very aware of God in her life and in that of her unborn child. I really liked the angle you took in writing this.
personal niggle the "chocolate eyes" of the principal just gave me a strange picture of something between a dog or a confectionery. not sure what you ere trying to convey but the picture lingered and detracted me. :-)
05/20/11
Hope resonates within your article. I was blessed just reading. Nice work!
ephesians 5 says love your wife as Christ loved the church and gave himself up for her. No one likes to think what this kind of love really is until they get into a situation where they have to look at it. God has so many ways of teaching us
05/24/11
Great job of taking us along for the ride as you moved from sadness, disappointment and rejection to joy, hope and redemption. Nice job.
How many young women make that mistake and think their lives are over. I enjoyed your story very much and the fact that she found her lost faith again. Thank you.
05/26/11
well done jessica :-) highly commended is a great achievement.