The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this! and it's an unusual story for me to want more of. Good job well told;with vivid characters. I was pulled in as though I was there.
Good job! I enjoyed this story. It was very well told, with convincing detail.
I thought this was good, too. I DO agree with Christine about the captain's name and the narrator's occupation.
10/24/05
Kathryn, congratulations on your Highly Commended Award for Level 2. Well done. You also ranked 24th overall (out of 135 entries), so that definitely deserves a big pat on the back. There really wasn't a great deal separating the top 30 entries. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)