The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
05/12/11
This entry is this week's randomly chosen winner of our weekly bonus prize--a free ratings feedback report. The author will be contacted today via the Private Messenger service with more information.

Congratulations. :-)

Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
05/14/11
oooo well done on the "random selection" of the bonus prize. I so would like to know what they say!!
a lovely look at mothers day.. I was wondering how this busy character had the time to make presents for ALL the mothers in her church. I also was wondering how it fitted in the topic until you cleverly talked about the "pouring out" of mothers in service and wrapped it up beautifully.
now i wonder if the experts will say ANY of this??
To begin, "CONGRATS!" This truly was a beautifully written story. One that I enjoyed from beginning to end. Very touching and heart warming. Great job and keep writing.