The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/11
an interesting and unique take on the topic.You look at that magical (in the spiritual amazing sense of the word) topic of Going Out by turning OUTGOING on its head.
to make it even better try to Space out your paragraphs and try and put some more flesh on the ideas.
well done and look forward to reading more!
05/15/11
Dating is such a topsy-turvy time of life, yet such an important time. We hope and pray that our children listen to what they've learned.
It would help to put in some action and dialogue to illustrate your advice.
Keep writing!
05/15/11
Short and sweet. You covered the teenage years nicely. On your next entry put a space between paragraphs. It makes it easier for the reader. Good job and keep writing.