The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/11
Wow. Wonderfully written and very engaging. I love your take on this topic. A great entry!
05/12/11
Nice perspective in a time when far too many are facing that situation.
05/14/11
Wow! good one i think every entry in the intermediate should be a winner this week...this one included!
cant think of any changes or suggestions..
05/15/11
That happens to so many older employees. After so many years the new employees that take older employees places look like they aren't old enough to drive let alone work. How well I remember. Good job and thanks for writing an interesting story.
05/17/11
Very well written take on the weekly topic and good job in developing your story in a way that we can surely relate
05/19/11
congrats on second place!! the judges agreed that this was a great piece of writing
07/07/11
Good article, but how could she be so happy about being fired. Maybe there were more jobs available then now at that time.
Well written, with details and feelings made to be felt by the reader. Keep writing.