The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so very well written and the title was perfect. Who needs horses and chariots when they have a God who can do the impossible. I loved this so very much. Thank you for a winner in my opinion.
This is a nice rendition of the Exodus story. You made it come alive. Make sure you start a new paragraph for every new speaker, even if it's just a word or two. You did a nice job shining the characters fears and anxieties.
Congratulations for placing 6th in level 2!