The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/11
Beautifully written and so very true. I enjoyed this story immensely. Well told and very well written.
05/09/11
These are great characters. The beginning felt like I was reading A better to home. Try introducing the conflict earlier and possibly have more than one conflict. You have a nice setting, great characters, and covered the topic in a fresh way.