The Official Writing Challenge
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An article that presents a lesson learned. I liked the way Julie liked Marge in spite of her sinful ways.

Keep writing.
well written and a good original take on the theme but very topical too. I would have liked a more zippy title to go with the pace of the piece.
This is a fresh take on the topic. I liked the characters and the suspense. Be careful of little mistakes, a forgotten, misspellings, and other minor errors can be distracting. Youhave a great message and managed to deliver it without becoming too preachy, which can be difficult to do.