The Official Writing Challenge
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WHOA! Now that is truly some heavy thinking went into this, but I do believe the only one left behind will be 144,000 Jews. I may be wrong.
05/07/11
gosh very dramatic but ell told as well. I could see this like a film unfolding..... i was waiting for the ... wake up it as a dream.... but i am glad that you did not end it in that overdone and lame way
Wow this is full of suspense and kept me reading right to the end. nice take on the topic.