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I enjoyed reading the way you subtly weaved demonic influence into your story line.

Remain blessed.
04/23/11
Loved this story. Great intrigue, wonderful ending. Great take on topic.
You did a great job with this, I had goosebumpsand was holding my breath, you did a great job with just the right anoint of conflict and a believable ending.
I could feel the tension in this story. Glad Melissa got out of there!
04/26/11
I was caught up in the story from the first few lines. Your words invite the reader to keep going and your depiction of the spiritual battle was compelling. Great job!
04/27/11
Your story made me think of the young folks today who don't know the dangers hidden in the occult. This would be good to include in a devotional that the "unreached" might read. You hooked me with the meddling imp.
04/28/11
Whew! What a narrow escape for Melissa. I'm glad she made the right decision -- so many are decieved. I did enjoy this read -- well told.