The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/11
An interesting and cute story with a message to speak to us readers about sharing God's gifts. Well done - keep writing!
04/25/11
I enjoyed your story and loved the characters. I had a few questions about the setting - why were people asking for handouts and where were they - but the later part of the story sort of explained that. I loved the title.
A gripping story of faith and hope of two beautiful children of God who shared all their worldly possessions with strangers and the title fit the story like a glove. Very good story and very well written.
This is a delightful idea and I loved the characters. Congratulations for ranking 8th in level two!