The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent job holding my attention. Love the ending.
You did an excellent job with this story. I was pulled into the story and held captive to each word and the ending was absolutely fantastic. Thank you for sharing a well written story that in my opinion a winner.
This is a great piece of writing. I finished the story and felt I would like to read more, as 750 words seems too short to fully develop out the journey of this lost soul who finds life through Christ. Well done.
You did a great job with this realistic realistic heartfelt message, Congratulations for ranking 6th in level 2!