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This sounds like a true story. If it is, I'm sorry and I hope things will be reconciled in the near future. This writing caught my heart. Good job.
04/23/11
having a 17 yr old daughter myself this tugs my heart strings. you capture the stresses and strains of teenage independence well. I was confused her mother would not let her go to a party where there were no people over 19 present. was it that she felt that there still needed to be adult supervision?
The ending was unexpected and i felt the lack of resolution and uncertainty that yo write about when someone you love disappears.
04/23/11
I too felt it tug at my heart strings. If it is a true story, I sure hope the daughter gets found.
the title speaks volumes by itself and the story tore my heart. I felt the pain of regret and the fact that Maggie was so deceived by her rich spoiled friends that she did something so rash. If this is true my heart as well as my prayers go out to you.