The Official Writing Challenge
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Very beautiful!
I like the form you use in your poetry - it needs to be slightly more consistent, but only slightly. For example, I'd write: "With generosity/Do you think/that you would see/Prosperity." Also, I wouldn't write "fellow man" anymore unless you were only writing for men, but that's just my feminist nitpickiness talkin'...
"Fellow man", is fine. Hey, if the Bible does it, why can't you.
All this feminist stuff... Pah! Anyway, what a refreshing poem. Nice one!
If your seeds are grown in the rich soil of the Master's own garden, then the results will be rows and rows of patience, love, kindness, selflessness, joy, and giving. What a wonderful harvest for ones lifelong labors! Thanks for this thought-provoking poem.