The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
A very well written piece, with a very strong message. Well done.
I like how you used diarrhea of the mouth as an outbreak. It is very true what we say can spread like crazy and be very very hurtful. Remember to use small paragraphs and double space to give the reader that white space. Good job with developing intriguing characters and interesting dialog.
Good way of presenting the story and the issue. Very effective. Good job, keep writing!
Congratulations for placing 9th in level two!