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04/16/11
very clever the way you linked the anxieties of the past "outbreaks" of disease and the present fears of digital viruses and then rounded it off with the good infectious power of the Gospel :-) There was alot to fit in here and i am sure you would have liked at least a whole chapter for each !
This is A beautiful piece. I enjoyed how you showed each generations fears and worries. This is a well-written piece that makes one stop and think.
04/20/11
I love the way you draw a comparison between "viruses," and then bring in the virus one needs never fear. You developed the article well and the progression of ideas was easy to follow.

Just one observation. Instead of writing..."the Holy Spirit from giving people the strength of breaking out from..., a smoother read would be: "the Holy Spirit from giving people the strength to break from...

Your summary was right on!
Great job!