The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/11
Beautiful
I suggest you stay with one scene.
Keep writing!
This is lovely. I liked how you covered different ages, but no matter the age when me die, Jesus is waiting for us.
03/23/11
Very touching poem. How precious when those who love the Lord are with their loved ones as they pass. Thanks for sharing! God bless!