The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful! You did a spectacular job showing the anger and grief of the MC. Nicely done and well-written!
03/19/11

Wow!

This was excellent. The writing was powerful in imagery. I have to admit it came off sounding science-fictionish like C.S. Lewis's Perelandra. (which I liked btw)
03/23/11
I agree...a bit science-fictiony (is that a word? LOL) but I LOVED it. Great writing and wonderful story. Good job, well done. If it were a movie, I would definitely go to see it. God bless!