The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
Satan is the great deceiver, the father of lies. I've heard people say what they're going to do in hell. It breaks my heart. Your story has good flow and holds the reader's interest.Thanks for sharing.
I was pretty sure he was entering hell instead of heaven, but it still gripped me when the curtains were opened. Nicely done.
03/20/11
wow! clever ! i kinda knew there would be a punchline but it was still good when it came
A very interesting read. Although I knew what was coming before I reached the end I still enjoyed this very much.
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