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03/17/11
Such a nice approach to the topic. So touching, so much tenderness by the mother to her child. So much truth in this.
Thanks for sharing.
This is a sweet story. I liked how the mother was honest and age appropriate with her daughter. Tiny note all ready in your context should be already. You did a wonderful job with the characters characters and dialog.
03/20/11
this mother daughter dialogue was precious and lovely. thank you for putting this together in such a endearing and touching piece
I truly enjoyed The Story. Thank you for sharing such a tender story.