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The faith of a child and their questions is always a good topic to reflect on. Nice job with the dialogue.
Lovely father-daughter story with a good take on the topic. Enjoyed the dialog! God bless!
I, too, love the dialog. And the message is simple enough that I believe adults should read it through at least once a day, to keep this message of grace on our minds and in our hearts. Thank you for the reminder.
Such nice flow with believable dialog, as well as a great message of God's remarkable love for His children and His unmerited favor. Thanks for sharing.
lovely....right through....from the title to the dialogue and through to the end.You certainly have a gift :-)
Ahh this is such a sweet exchange by father and daughter.
A loving Tender Story about love as seen through the eyes of a child. I love the dialogue between the dad and daughter. So sweet, tender and loving. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story.